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You guys get double snippets today because I forgot to post last night and because I want to. :)
Figments Friday is an original feature for writers, wherein they share something about their writing, a character interview, an excerpt, a conversation between a character from one WIP and a character from another WIP, ect. Feel free to join in!
Rules:
1. If you use my image please give me credit!
2. You DON'T have to do the same style post as me and can post in what every style you want about whatever you want as long as it has to do with sharing your writing. (Not advice)
3. Please remember to link back to me in your post, giving me credit for the feature and make sure to link up by using the button at the bottom of this post!
Note: I reserve all rights to all of my original work. If you quote or reference any of it I ask that you give me credit. Any snippets and excerpts are works in progress and may have typos or need more editing, for the most part they are first drafts.
WIP II:
WIP I:
Haha that scene. I finally get to see it (the second snippet) ;)
ReplyDeleteDo you mind if I point out something? I really don't want this to be like a "criticizing" comment, which I wouldn't talk to you like that but still. Erhh. Ok, you kind of switch verb tenses in the middle of the 2nd snippet from present to past. Whew! I got it out.
Besides that, man, I mean I loved reading these snippets. I really feel like snippet 1 is something deep and awesome. And of course, I'm so glad I got to peek into the MC's pov from snippet 2. *claps*
I know and that's just a part of it!
ReplyDeleteOh please point away! :D I want you to eventually read both of them when they are done and be my critique partner/editing buddy. (If you want I won't force you!) Ugh, ok, I'm not surprised I'vekeep doing that on accident and sometimes I miss fixing it in a few spots. Thanks for pointing it out in this one! I thought I'd fixed it but I see where you are talking about.
Aww thanks! I'm glad you like it! And yes that is exactly what snippet one will hopefully end up as. ;)
Snippet two was great! Very funny! While the first one is more philosophical. Which one of your Works in Progress are they from? You're a great writer!
ReplyDeleteCarly @ Books and Etc.
Thanks, I am glad you found it humorous! Yes, the WIP the firat one is from is a lot harder emotionally to write . The first clip is from WIP 2 " The healing properties of death(or loss)" and the second is from WIP 1 "tThe Island Killer." Thanks so much! That means a lot!
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